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Double-edged Sword










I gave the love you wanted,

and as you demonstrated

a complete lack of interest

in garnering my respect,
accomodated you there as well.

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  • Amera gold member
    June 22

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    Wow! Quite a bit of power in this one liner. I read it several times and I like it.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • rhondasail
    June 21

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    Seems you've found it...the proper contest. Nice acidic piece with just the right sweetness in the ending. Like an orange, tart but delicious. Peace, Rhonda