Try me
I am sweeter than honey
And fizzier than fizzy water
Pour me onto ice
And swallow me
You'll never be thirsty again
And you won't even gain a single gramme of weight!
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The LittleAnn that refreshes
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this is funny!!!!
lol this is funny!!!!
have a nice day,
-slick99
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LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL!
Oh and did I mention? LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!
Come on over baby, thinking of Barbie girl when I read this, our video you remember? I felt just as sweet...
Jo
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XD
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A nice way to dilute one's wine, is with tonic water, and a slice of lemon...
But not for the heavy red wines like Cabernet Sauvingon- mainly the white wines and the rosé.
You take care LA.
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Aww this is cute and perfectly YOU
All the best with this
Gaylene
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oh okay. pardon me than for my correction. i stand corrected.
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haha this is hilarious.
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not bad. although "gramme" should be "gram".
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The spelling "gramme" is British English, it's not really common, but I kind of like it.
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