My life's long dream is for you to die,
while you are dead you will continue to cry.
Cry about me being stronger than you,
cry because I poisoned your food.
Cry because me you cannot love,
cry because I stand above.
Cry because you cannot scream,
cry because I'm compleating my life's long dream.
I'll grab the knife and force it through your chest,
just remember, this is for the best.
My life's long dream is for you to die,
while you are dead you will continue to cry.
Cry because now I'm above,
cry because you have no love.
Cry because this is not a dream,
cry because they can't hear your scream.
Cry because your life is through,
cry because I'm stronger than you.
Finally you forced out your one last scream,
now I have compleated my life's long dream.
Author notes
I know it isn't great, but oh well... I like it.
A contest entry
- That was you? Omg I'm sorry ( For Everyone :] ) by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
450 points, ended June 24, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - There's only hate, there's only tears, there's only pain, there is no love here. So what will you do? by Jaffa-.
700 points, ended February 26, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I liked this. It's really emotional and kinda dark. I really liked this. Thank you for your entry. and well done. xo
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Wow.......that's about all I can say for this. But I understand it. I've written stuff like this, and the bad thing about that is I cry when I write this stuff bc even though it may seem bad, even horrible to someone else seeing it, it gives you a sense of pleasure.
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um wow...
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this is..scary.also kinda creepy.good rhythm and flow.i liked it and disliked it at the same time.
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Hey Sexy!
This better not be about me, my guess is it's about the Retal units. Don't tell anyone but we may be down in Alabama in a few months to pick up the new car we got. It's gonna be mine and Eupha's but mostly mine XD I have some guys to tell u about i might be hooking up with. There's about 7 of them and they are fucking hot.
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awsome work baby I really loved it a lot and I hope that we can talk later
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I liked your poem I can't say which part I liked best because I liked the whole poem. It was really well written and keep up the good work!
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Amazing..Awesome
Wow.
I like this its short and sweet. Its very well written and amazing. Worded so well. my favorite part is when you said "Finally you forced out your one last scream,"
Plus i could see everything that i read
Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck in it.
for you
xxx..<3..
Rawr
aka
Shelly
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