Do you care at all?
Now that is all I think about.
Can稚 you just give me an answer?
Then I値l finally stop thinking about this,
Day and night.
Would you give me the help I might need?
I only hope that you値l be there when I ask.
Would you catch me if I fall?
So that I知 finally sure
That you know I知 not invisible.
Do you even know how I feel?
To be left here on the side.
Do you really think I知 nothing?
Because I know I知 not.
And if you won稚 answer me,
I don稚 know how I値l walk away
From this all,
And not feel bad for myself.
Author notes
While writing this, it made me think of a real close friend.
A contest entry
- That was you? Omg I'm sorry ( For Everyone :] ) by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
450 points, ended June 24, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow
This is a amazing write. Its Very well written and worded so great i could picture everything as i read it. My favorite part is when you said "I don’t know how I’ll walk away" Very good very good thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
for you
xxx..<3..
RAWR -
I believe this is Heaven;
to no one else but me...read alot but finally can't walk away; I believe every line rhymed precision exponetially. I love it when people see this. Thanks.
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Synthia - you are now my hero
Your poems are amazing ,
And im stealing this
and putting it on my myspace pro .
ILLLYYY
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