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~XianariA~

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It's not a place, an object, product or person...
Xianaria is the ultimate state of worship.

Experience the total freedom of abandoning yourself
into the full presence of God.

Close your eyes, lift your hands, let yourself go...
Experience the Holy Spirit in your life
at any given time in worship...

Behold the power of Xianaria!

Author notes

http://thesurrealist.co.uk/slogan Xianaria ~ Behold the Power of Xianaria
I want you to write me a 10 line ONLY poem based off of that slogan
Your poem title MUST be the name you chose when you "sloganized"

Photo credit:
http://www.catecheticsonline.com/images/praise.jpg

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  • Swan song gold member
    June 24, 2008
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    Excellent A very proclaiming and proud poem and well done!!!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    very nice. good take on your slogan and you even have a pic to go with it.


  • Wolfdog silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    Superb

    Indeed and excellent write. With excellent imagery. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Hope you have a good day.


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    Loved this!!!!!!!!!
    The power of the Holy Spirit being in his precence is the most peaceful and powerful place to ever be.
    Your writing diplictes the feeling of the awesomeness of Gods spirit!

    Great work!
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