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A Passionate Breeze

 

 

 

A pleasant waft

on a sultry summer day,

to tantalize and refresh,

 

a friendship, precious

language to stir my spirit

as soul beckons soul,

 

much more than beautiful

expressions, and alas; words

shall have to suffice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

A little praise and admiration for my sexy next door neighbor and friend Tara, better known
as, 'ardentMarch.'

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  • Avendesora Dreamer gold member
    July 24

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    "as sould bekons soul" I smile, thinking of those that I have met that I share a deeper than words connection and how I ache to be able to describe it, yet know that I can't...what sweet words you write!

  • PurringKitten
    June 26

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    soft, sweet and filled with praise..admiration for the beauty with a sexy sigh thrown in for good measure really like and thanks for sharing


  • ardentMarch gold member
    June 22

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    thanks Micheal...this is gorgeous....

    I love words...and these are beautiful words you have written for me


  • Gwenevere
    June 22
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    This is a lovely write.She will be so pleased.Special friends are so important, Ros


  • Zayra
    June 22

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    Your creativity is really blossoming and growing.

    Excellent poem.


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 21

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    ahhhh, but they are your words, sweet poet, and I am quite sure our friend will love this tribute. Love, lane


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    June 21

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    A lovely tribute to a friend.

    Best wishes in the contest.

    Love Margaret

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