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Milk it

©2008 by Elizabeth Darkwell

I shake it to the left, I shake it to the right
in between my legs an I shake with all my might
Up an down an round my hips then, gentle to my lips
feel it flow like silk, theres nothin like strawberri milk

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  • tarcus
    July 10, 2008
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    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAwWWWWWWWWWWWWWNNNNNNNNNNN


  • Blooming Poet
    July 5, 2008
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    I agree, but I love it

  • Hovels 2
    June 29, 2008

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    Now, I know you are talking about something dirty in this poem. I can't be wrong this time.

    Chocolate, okay. Brushing your teeth, okay. But, I know you are not talking about strawberry milk in this one.