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When Darkness Comes

God's light shines
If you lose your way
Search for the cross

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This is my first Haiku. Hopefully, I did it right. Hope that you like it.

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    I do like this...I am allowing senyru's because of the picture. Haiku is usually of nature. Senyru is the same except about anything. I tell you this since you say you are new to haiku. "Gods" should be "God's"
    Also, just for your information...you might like to read this.. http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2340132
    If you took the haiku class, you will learn a lot more as well. I did, and I loved it.
    Thank you for entering the contest. A great piece.
    Kelli