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Zvezda

Star so light and bright
I can see you but my sun
makes you fade to blue

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    This is a nice haiku, however, the first line having the capital is really a no no; easily changed. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli