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Eveningtide

random points
of light
poetic inspiration

A contest entry

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  • individuality gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    ah yes - those random momnets that devour us - at least, and in my opinion, you stuck to the light when most go for the dark.


  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    Now this is very nice. I like the "random points of light" Very well crafted. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli


  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008

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    You misspelled inspiration (maybe just a typo), and didn't follow the syllabic rules of Haiku, but it's got a great message.
    I like it

    Good luck in the contest