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In Loves Time

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In loves time I snuggle with you

and enjoy the sweetest kiss

Knowing what we feel for each other

is a rare and treasured bliss

 

Feeling the warmth of your love

cuddling in your safe arms

Makes me feel complete with self

as I melt into your charms

 

Your hand cups my face in sweet caress

as you search my loving eyes

You speak in softest tone of voice

your passion for me how deep it lies

 

In love time we will embrace

and enjoy the pleasures of love

Kissing and hugging in sweet caress

closing our eyes and drifting to clouds above

 

 

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  • judmc
    June 23

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    Immeasurable

    Congratulations on your silver trophy for such a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it very much.
    Best Wishes and kind regards George +++

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    June 22

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    you have painted the scenario of the heart and touches the inner joy of love..well done..and thanks for sharing such a wonderful write...

  • Sarah Louise
    June 21

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    Wow... I really like this one. Its exactly how I feel. But you convey it much better than I could. This is exactly the type of poem I was looking for when I began this contest.
    Thanks for entering and good luck.
    Sarah


  • arafura
    June 21

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    "Feeling the warmth of your love
    cuddling in your safe arms
    Makes me feel complete with self
    as I melt into your charms..."

    Very sweet and loving poem my friend. BRAVO!