While his pen wiggles,
his chair says firm.
His sense of humor,
plays on metaphors.
Deep passionate writes,
he brings to us.
Thoughtful insights,
and blunt reality.
Friendly comments he writes,
helping his fellow poets along.
One thing is for sure,
a quiet man he is.
But the prose form his muse,
is strong.
Keep penning those poems,
that only you can do.
For this birthday wish,
I send to you.
With love and admiration,
~Sie
Author notes
Happy Birthday my friend...
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday Penman by Starz of Heaven.
1650 points, ended June 21, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A lovely wish!
A birthday wish wrapped up with rhyming verse to full of admiration. A win for a worthy pen!
Congratulations!
Jennifer
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Precious!!
Aaaaaaaaaaaw~
This is a Beauty of a piece penned that touches deep~
Love the message also the words weaved to show Appreciation for this Wonderful man
Love this!!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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A Pretty Tribute!
This is an encouraging and joyful little tribute, and I'm sure he'll treasure it. I'm glad you took the time to write it- these things are so often a cheerful something to hold onto when the pen has nothing to say!!!
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awww this was a really sweet dedication to a wonderful poet! I really love what Penman writes..
he brings new life to poetry.. Bravo. And congrats on the silver..
Angel
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Quite a benediction and a wonderful gift. So well said and so beautifully wrapped with your lovely flow.
Love, Tom B.
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sweet and warm from your heart
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Well this indeed is a great poem for him he is an amazing person ,father, uncle, brother, grandpa and is loved by many thank you kindly for writing be well
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Beautiful
Aww, thank you so much Sie, this was very heart felt. Thank you for being a wonderful friend and sharing you kindness in so many ways
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