I once cared so much for him,
I thought he was my best friend,
until one day the truth came out
and it all came to an end.
Once the person of my dreams,
he was a treasure to find,
I thought he was the right one
but the relationship was left behind.
The day it suddenly happened,
death became him in my mind,
in my heart he had passed away,
a soul mate tragedy of its kind.
Our feelings were lost and gone forever,
the winds of joy came crashing down,
my broken heart lied bleeding
as I faced his death with a frown.
He was dead and gone forever,
it was a serious matter to me,
his death was a tragic loss,
for we were once meant to be.
A contest entry
- Loss by MrsJones.
400 points, ended July 7, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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So sad!
But to have loved and lost is better than never to have loved at all!
Good luck in the contest,
Jennifer
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How sad to have lost a 'soul mate'
surely 'the winds of love' will 'come carshing down'
'tragic loss'
I am sorry for you were 'once meant to be'
and much 
Lib x
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