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Tweety's Going to Win

 

 

Tweety saw a puty cat,

then ran and ran and ran.

His tiny steps were slow,

though he ran fast as he can.

 

Poo on mean Sylvester,

for trying to eat him.

Why not eat some turkey,

or a piece of slim jim?

 

Tweety is so pretty,

as yellow as can be.

Bright eyed and innocent,

like you sweet Katie.

 

Though Sylvester makes plans

to catch tweety again.

He's wasting his time

cause Tweety's going to win.

 

 

Click on Big Tweety

 

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  • penman gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    excellent

    Oh my what an amazing creation for the contest. So truly well done. Congrats on the gold. It was well deserved.


  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    How fun was this? You did a great job with this childrens write. I like that you added the audio. Congratulations on the gold.
    Kelli


  • MagicLady silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    This was by far, hands down......Katie's favorite entry. You kept her interst with short rhyming verses and of course the added photos helped, I am sure. Thanks so very much !!


    Cheryl & Katie
    PS She really liked seeing her name in print as well.


    • Samplette gold member
      June 23, 2008
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      Thank you so much, it was so much fun!! for Katie.
      Did ya'll click on big Tweety?


  • showtunediva
    June 22, 2008

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    this a very good write Sam. it has a nice flow to it. Good luck in the contest.
    love
    Janine

    sorry i haven't commented on your stuff in ages i've been busy with school and job searching.


  • Frozentearz
    June 22, 2008

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    Ahh this was a delight to read love the bright
    color it brings along with it.
    Best of luck to you in the contest
    warm thoughts
    Frozentearz


  • CountryCousin
    June 22, 2008

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    I love Tweety.

    When I had my first surgery for cervical cancer I wore a Tweety Bird shirt. That was to let them know that I was who I was and so they would not get me mixed up with someone else and take the wrong part out LOL. But I love Tweety and this is a cute poem for Katie.

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