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Gifts Yet to Bestow

soft whispers, suggestions
hands slide down to wrists
lead you to a special place-
wax drips from candles
smelling of ylang-ylang,
sandalwood, in fetish memories
lotus blossoms, lavendar
hangs from walls.

lips met with hunger
tongues lash in violent sweeps-
hands rove and caress
clothes melt away
dispersed into the forgotten,
while ragged breath
draws from the skimming
of pearl tongue tip,
meet warm smooth velvet
of skin so pliant.

ephemeral and auric,
healing and soothing-
cadences of heartbeats
so swiftly the rage
need surges to swell
gripping strong shoulder.
taking it all in
curves, planes of flesh
tasting, suckling, pinning,
while you are
 
                                                                   gasping...
  moaning...
                                 begging...

eruptions of sweet fluidity
shouts bucking into awaiting mouth.
releasing, extending,
making these moments last
until the throbbing stops
enraptured...

eyes once squeezed shut
with splendor and fantasy,
now open to possibility
glazed with newfound wonder.

Author notes

Purposefully writing outside of my comfort zone. It's not often I write erotica.

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  • Cerbie20
    August 31
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    very good poem. and i cant believe you wrote this out of your comfort zone! it was very very good! the imagery was very good... and i blush as i type this, but i could see it all. lol. very good job! oh, and i love the smell of ylang ylang! my house literally reeks of it. lol. very good job!

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  • Cerulean gold member
    July 9
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    "eruptions of sweet fluidity" - beautiful work.


  • sOuL gold member
    July 2
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    Do i only own this poem or we share our hearts together??

    • Hakon
      July 12
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      Good sir,
      If I may be so bold. If you shared your hearts together, you wouldn't have to ask..
      The Lady has given you something, I'm sure other men would absolutely be green with envy for. Be grateful.

  • toomysterious
    June 30

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    Gorgeous background and the erotica artfully done. Well deserved gold. Don't know how I missed it before.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Piccola gold member
    June 24

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    written so well
    and how good the flow.

    I hate to say this, but I was visualizing it all and I won't share what I'm feeling

  • Jonathan ROBIN gold member
    June 22

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    Unexpected ...

    All wrapped up and no place to go.

    In English another version would normally be addressed as "All dressed up and nowhere to go" - but perhaps one would deserve dressing down given the fact that dresses and "clothes melt away"


  • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
    June 21

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    With writing like this I am certain you will not be short of volunteers. This is a tour de force, and I hope you stay out of the box for quite some time. Have three bunnies.


    • Hetha gold member
      June 22

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      How sweet of you to say, I am humbled by your lovely comment I'll see what else my muses can whip up..hmm.. maybe..

  • Terry Collett
    June 21
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    Baudleaire would have loved this as do I.

    Yes, good indeed.
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