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June 21st

I shouldn't have done it.
I just shouldn't have done it.

I was used,
I even knew this at the time,
I gave in without a second thought
  Of these feelings that I feel now.
In all honesty i was caught
In a moment forever fleeting away
I feel im on the verge of tears
  What a 'perfect' end to a 'perfect' day.

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  • ultimate beluga
    July 5, 2008
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    wow thats an amazing poem, tragic though and i hope youre ok...
    great great poem though


  • Black-Dark-Pixie
    June 22, 2008
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    :(

    Carla.. it wasn't ur fault.. ur not in the wrong hunni.. this is good tho.. love you xx