My life was once
an empty canvas
until you poured
rainbow ink
upon my yellowish page
Sweetness upon your lips,
I bathed snapshots of
colored souvenirs,
happy times soaked
in your perspiration,
our moments dripping into
the kaleidoscope of us
lyrical notes I kept
are now a desolate song
swept away by the dying wind
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this is the original poem:
Lyrical Lies ... Title
My life was once
an empty canvas
until you poured
rainbows ink
upon my yellowish page
Sweetness upon your lips,
I bathed snapshots of
colored souvenirs
lyrical notes that I kept
is now but a desolate song
swept away by the dying wind
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Excellent! I could not say a word but WOW. Excellent blending with the original poem. Great penning and thank you for sharing.
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Cleverly done... and it seems as though it was originally written that way... very seamless and well done... best of luck...
Ken
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