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[ heavens gate ]

heavens gate
reflected
in the stars

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    I really like this. One sees many things through the eyes of another. Very well crafted. Thank you for entering.
    Kelli


  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008

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    I love the message of this poem, but I'm not too crazy about the disregard to (or maybe lack of knowledge of) the syllabic rules of Haiku.

    Good luck in the contest


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 21, 2008

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    The stars are a wonderous thing since the dawn of time. Mankind has always looked towards the stars for guidence and wonderment...Nicely done! ~Sie