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[ spotted eyes ]

spotted eyes
with ingrained
golden glaze

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    I like the way you went with this. Stepping out of the box so to speak. Very nice. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli


  • LadyDementia gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    Short and sweet, beautifully penned. All the best in the contest with it


  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008

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    I like this one a lot, though, it doesn't follow the syllabic rules of Haiku.

    Good luck in your contest