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Heads to The North Star.

the first evening star burns
over Mt. Fuji igniting the northern sky
lights are becoming celestial calligraphy

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    This is a nice write, however, the form is way off. The most is should be is 5 7 5. You have 4 9 7. I will be reading again when contest closes. Thank you for entering.
    Kelli

  • blaq roze
    June 23, 2008

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    oh, my god!! this was very, very beautiful, very well written...i'm glad i stopped by your page

    light becomes calligraphy...wow!...what wonderful imagery

    EXCELLENT!!


  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008

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    This one paints a beautiful picture

    It isn't perfect as far as the syllabic rules of Haiku, but it's still really pretty