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Stars


stars
shine bright
in my skies











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haiku

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    I like how you made this personal.."in my skies" instead of in the skies. Very nice. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli


  • penman gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    excellent

    so very well done. Captures the essence of the sky so perfectly. Best of luck in the contest


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    Isn't interesting how we all perceive even the sky differently, must be the eyes that are different.
    Marlene


  • raggyann
    June 21, 2008
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    short and nice
    leaves one to wonder on


  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008

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    This is pretty, but doesn't follow the form of Haiku.

    Good luck in the contest


  • Patpowers silver member
    June 21, 2008

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    Good work on this Haiku Karl! Bright way with the words in this! Thanks my friend!!

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