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Like a Phantom

Like a phantom in the night
I know something is not right.
I heard it in your voice today
Even though you would not say
I relish the moment that you do
With all our strength
we’ll make it through

Like mythical creatures we are in twain
our hearts and souls are the same
You cannot hide it from me my dear
I am here with a listening ear.

but until we talk again
I ask God to send a glint of light
with rainbow colors to make you smile
To compose a beautiful symphony
To make your heart sing.


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Like a phantom in the night
I know something is not right.
I heard it in your voice today
Even though you would not say
I relish the moment that you do
With all our strength
we’ll make it through

Like mythical creatures we are in twain
our hearts and souls are the same
You cannot hide it from me my dear
I am here with a listening ear.

but until we talk again
I ask God to send a glint of light
with rainbow colors to make you smile
To compose a beautiful symphony
To make your heart sing.



Love you with all my heart

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  • penman gold member
    June 22, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Such a deep and provoking write, so very well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • creationsfromheart
    June 21, 2008

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    Mom Please do not worry about me you are not responsible for me now, I am grown and have to deal with life sometimes, but honestly nothing is wrong my foot was hurting and those pain pills make me so tired but I can't sleep so just not getting much sleep I love you and please do not worry if something is really really wrong You would be the first I come to ... Love you with all my heart.