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[ rising stars ]

rising stars
in sweeping stages

soon shine

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Ithica silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    We ARE the stars the brooms and sooner or later we all will shine... This is a pretty "groovy ku" too, in a universal way!!! hehe!!!


  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    I like this. The "sweeping stages" is a great picture that I can see. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli


  • james119
    June 23, 2008
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    clever ku ... L2 is a multi-directional pivot

    james


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    Clever play with words, as usual... blending the astronomical and entertainment field - both shine, go through stages.
    Marlene


  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008

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    It's cute, but doesn't follow the rules of a Haiku.

    1st line: 5 syllables
    2nd line: 7 syllables
    3rd line: 5 syllables

    It's still really cute though

    Good luck in the contest

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