Who is that girl in the old dusty frame
Who strangely looks somewhat like me?
I don't remember her first or last name.
Now who in the world could it be?
Who is this girl on this old album page?
Do you also feel deja vu?
Seems at the time I'd have been 'round her age,
But I don't recall her. Do you?
Who is this girl in this scrapbook of mine?
I'm sure that I knew her quite well
Or else she'd not star in the scrapbook's design.
Yet what was her name? None can tell.
Now who is this girl, but this time not alone?
Who on earth could it possibly be?
I certainly don't like the boy that is shown -
So I know it's not possibly me!
A contest entry
- Rhyme Time by Poetess12.
1200 points, ended June 23, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by Midnight-x-Rose.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Well deserving for the gold. I probably need not tell why you've won... for this right here is just simply wonderful. Congrats once again.
Blessed be
-Blanche
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Nice write. Congrats on the gold trophy, it was well deserved. This is a great piece!! Nice rhyming and rhythm!!
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i swear to god i didn't notice the rhyme till half way through. of course that is undoubtedly the point. i didn't find the words that rhymed particularly awesome, but i can't speak highly enough of the subtlety in which you execute it.
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Very Nice!
Many an old picture I look at of me, I say the same thing. I'm not the person I used to be. I guess that's what photographs are for, to capture the moment, because it doesn't last...it's only passing.
Good job!
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bravo
Another deviously superb poem by the very undevious Frodofan who's got "the knack" bigtime... bravo... bravo... bravo...
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Nice work!
You did a marvelous job on this with the style of rhyme. It was captivating to read this. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST!
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Oh fantastic! Love this poem. It flows so well, your trademark practically perfect form. Excellent work!
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This poem just flows with rhyme. I really like it.
you did a great job on your poem.
Thanks for your entry in my contest.
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I was captivated and intrigued by this piece; brilliant rhyme and imagery.
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