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- Hand in Hand - [Spirit Speaks]

 

 

 

 

 

Found within lines on palm, He placed
tip of finger to illuminate ivory
around human appearance, flesh worn
over Gift wrapped.



No strings attached just stories to tell
next to your Heart, my head rested.

You whispered of God, His Greatness
but never pressed your Beliefs
or pushed scriptures when lips kissed
against mine.

I Believe have always Believed in Him
and You~

For fifty seven years, strands strengthened,
tightly weaved with generous layers,
uniquely understood after folds peeled back;
revealed intricate details as proof
of your qualities existence.

Before our windows opened, prior to our eyes
fixated within each others world.

You wrote in sprinkles, spread yourself thick
within verse here and there, toured thoughts
along seams I sought to feel~

and did on a dare Spirit made with self
to become tactile;
undress you bare, fondle each bone in body.

Prove authenticity through actions,
movements recorded in Mind~ replayed back
in solitary confinement and consultation
Archangels arranged during meditation.

You write in sprinkles, spread yourself thick
within verse here and there, tour thoughts 
'
again' along seams I - also others get to feel~

however in the end when it appears to say Exit.
Another door opens with Light left on
so lost Souls could rest, be on their merry way
while I hold onto more than a Visitor's pass.

We celebrate, carve vowels into Mortal flesh
on your day of birth, before and after
as Lovers do with Twin Flames Spirit born
within Soul Mates.

I'm Honored~ Blessed to have your hand in mine
while we toss and turn memories of a lifetime
in eternal fountain of Love's elixir.



                   [I Love You]



Author notes

Happy Birthday~ I Love You for ALL You are
and all You will be...also what You do
in-between...
You are my other half that completes me
whole next to my Munchkins-Family...
I'm Blessed to have You within my Mind,
Body and Soul~
as our Spirits dance together~ eternal...

**Pictures from Photobucket~
also had asked Divinity for Guidance
re: border also images~
as You can see...answer came...

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    Beautiful write here

    I found this piece very loving and with the depth it makes one feel the embrace of the LLord about you its so comforting we shall all stand for him to comfort those in need


  • Amera gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Yay! For another gold cup... You need a truck to carry all your gold away. This is wonderful and as usual with your poetry, it's filled with emotion.

    Love,
    Amera


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    My friend,
    This is just beautiful The love you hold for your other half just shines like a light in the dark
    Thank you for sharing your heart and soul; this touched my own heart as I KNOW it did his!
    Congratulations on the gold; MUCH DESERVED!!!!
    Hugs and blessings,
    Sandy


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 23, 2008

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    Visually and emotionally stunning

    "You wrote in sprinkles, spread yourself thick
    within verse here and there, toured thoughts
    along seams I sought to feel~"
    That is my favourite part, I just adore it!

    Absolutely fantastic write hun
    Congrats on the well deserved Gold


    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda

  • voluptuousvixen
    June 22, 2008
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    Wonderful


  • Naughtygrlred
    June 22, 2008
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    beautiful


  • Whoochi gold member
    June 22, 2008

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    OMG you have blown me away with this...bookm arked and full of wisdom, love, passion...Penman should cry at this exquisite verse....loved the ending..absolutely divine....Congrats on well deserved gold!


  • StarEyes
    June 22, 2008

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    What a beautiful, heartfelt wonderful birthday read! This one speaks volumes and shows so much love, it is amaizng!

    Congrats on the well deserved Gold!!

    Happy birthday to Penman!!

    and lots of love

    Nettie


  • maralisa silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    wow a wonderful birthday dedication for a great poet your words bring the reader beautiful images of peace all the way through I loved these stanza they touched my heart and soul For fifty seven years,strands strengthened,tightly weaved with generous layers,uniquely understood after folds peeled back;revealed intricate details as proof of your qualities existence.
    Before our windows opened, prior to our eyes fixated within each others world.You write in sprinkles, spread yourself thick within verse here and there, tour thoughts 'again' along seams I - also others get to feel~We celebrate, carve vowels into Mortal flesh
    on your day of birth, before and after
    as Lovers do with Twin Flames Spirit bore
    within Soul Mates.
    I'm Honored~ Blessed to have your hand in mine while we toss and turn memories of a lifetime
    in eternal fountain of Love's elixir.
    your poetic grace and love runs through your poem like a beautiful stream moving every ripple that flows with harmony congratulations on your shiny

  • Liquid memories
    June 21, 2008

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    sweet words wrapped inside of love`s gift shine brightly on the top of peak, resonating through heart and soul. such soft words you have penned, touches the strings of any cold heart with warmth and love. delightful message of feelings that caresses the inner spirit giving sweetness of song, gentleness of nature for all time. may your love be rewarded and fruition become reality. Sweet!


  • raggyann
    June 21, 2008
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    THIS IS JUST BEAUTIFUL


  • HaleyMary
    June 21, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Sis. A wonderful tribute piece for a fellow poet. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    June 21, 2008
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    beautiful granma


  • Stardust-luvr
    June 21, 2008

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    awesome my dear one - left me flowing in tears for the beauty of his and your souls reign within my spirit. many loving blessings always xxxx


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    awww grandma this is such a beautiful write so full of care and love. it made my heart smile. you have written with a softness that no one can replace. well done


  • penman gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Thank you darling for the gold of your love and the light in your words. The touch and heal, bring a glow to my thoughts. This comes from your precious heart, so deeply flowing with such eloquence. A perfect birthday present.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    This is a beautiful tribute and just left mein awe an amazing poem for an amazing person that leaves his mark on everything he touches have a nice weekend

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