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North Star (and son)

together, we're two
less than what you would expect
to light a new path.

A contest entry

Any good?

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  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    This is of perfect form with the 5 7 5 form...well crafted. The capitalization of the one line is not of a true haiku or senyru though. Thank you for entering.
    Kelli


  • james119
    June 23, 2008
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    I like that you invoke inquisitve thought with the last two lines.

  • Bad Bill
    June 23, 2008
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    I like this very much...and the title is inspired!

    Best of luck,
    Bill


  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008
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    Very cute