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Slipping Away

I feel like I'm slipping away
From everything I knew
The only thing I have
Are my scattered thoughts of you

It kills me to know
That you wont be around
Your what has kept me here
Kept my feet on solid ground

All the memory's of you
Are imbedded in my mind
I search for something more
But loneliness is all I find

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  • WeLiveWeDie
    June 21, 2008

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    Simple and good

    It's hard to lose something or someone,
    But there are many paths to walk and find new...
    Very nice poem, It is touching and makes you think.