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Picked to the Bone

I walked down the street
my feet softly touch, the pebbles and stone
my limp body walks, down the street
after being picked to the bone

her words in my head
that face and that scream
i try to pull in all the pain
that seems like a bright beam

my friends see my smile
not the pain in my eyes, as I walk in place
I feel like no one can help
I'm alone running a race

But then he looks at me
his eyes shining hard
and no matter how much i try
i can't keep up my gaurd

as his arms rap around me
it seems, again it wont show
and no one but me and him
will ever have to know

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  • HiddenByTheDark
    June 21, 2008
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    very cute and touching i really liked..
    ♥always Kate


  • Velvet Rose Petals
    June 21, 2008

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    Cute. It seems to me the brick wall is to get to your guy. and there are others in the way. very nice
    Rose