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Everlasting Love

A gift was sent to me not long ago,

 

 

A joyous present that I can't let go.

 

 

A precious baby girl, you see,

 

 

A gift from God made just for me.

 

 

Her grace and beauty beyond compare,

 

 

Her angel eyes, her golden hair.

 

 

Her heart was surely made of gold,

 

 

A loving presence to behold.

 

 

Just as I watched over her you see,

 

 

My daughter now watches over me.

 

 

Although in heaven she will remain,

 

 

I feel her presence just the same.

 

 

She visit me from time to time,

 

 

Just to bring me peace of mind.

 

 

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 24

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    A most beautiful composition--Very heartfelt & Sincere!
    Sad, but lovely all the same! a compassionate write.
    Congratulations on the award!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 21
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    Oh honey my heart breaks indeed

    Precious are the angels so given for the living to touch and know of this love so devine .God truly holds her within his arms and yes she does look over you every day and the light you so gave to her at birth will join you back together one day her light will show you the way

  • Puppydog gold member
    July 1

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    SO SWEET AND DEEPLY SAD!!!

    When a loved one leaves this earth before we do in our hearts is a very deep and everlasting sadness but their spirit watches over us everyday and lifts us up when we have troubles and hard times.


  • solitarytear
    June 29

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    this just

    blew me away.....the emotions behind it and the words....touch the heart and tug hard....you realy dont need luck but here its is anyway.....luck


  • Desire gold member
    June 28

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    Oh My Word!!



    Precious piece You have penned which tugs so hard at the Heartstrings A Gorgeous verse~
    Swells the eyes
    Love the rhyme~ Beautifully penned
    Bless Your Heart
    I Appreciate Your visit to my work

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • flopsicle popsicle
    June 25

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    thank you so much for this write, it made me cry, but tears of closer, and there are more tears the more poems i read. this was beautiful. thank you so much.

    thank you for entering my contest, i wish you the best of luck.


  • paw-writer silver member
    June 23

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    What a compassionate write this is! You have written some comforting words for this person who is in so much pain. May she find some comfort in these words. Nice write! Blessings, Patty


  • KiKi RaZorBlaDe
    June 22
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    touching

    thank you so much for your comment this poem was so beautiful and touching i loved it

  • goalsv
    June 22
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    A very sweet and positive poem. Making a happy moment out of a time of pain.


  • OrangeMarmalade silver member
    June 22
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    Beautiful!

    Excellent poem! I'm speechless!....


  • Providence
    June 22

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    This is movingly striking. Tender thoughts and emotions. This is a soft gently heartfelt write. It has a soothing and healing quality.

    Very well done!

    Ovations!

    Marianne

  • Virginia Logsdon
    June 21
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    AAAHH! This is so sweet and sooo precious!

    This poem and it's accompanying picture are sooooooooOO precious!

  • Ace - LightWithinMe silver member
    June 21

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    Hello Pisces Rainbow. A beautiful touching write. Treasured emotions, thoughts and views. I hope it helps the lady that reads these words in her contest. My regards.


  • ZeInkslinger Of God
    June 21

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    Beautiful!
    I love the emotion of love and peace of mind within this pen.
    one error:
    "A gift from God made just or me."
    i think "or" is supposed to be "for"
    Wonderful Write! =D
    God Bless,
    ZeInkslinger


  • Olivia33
    June 21
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    Perfect

    Poignantly beautiful
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