i did everything to make you happy,
feel like loosing myself somewhere.
take all the risk to love you,
but why sometimes i feel blue.
you say sweet thoughts that bring smiles,
but in times coldness is what you bring then i cry.
how i just stay contented and sigh,
this is the way you are and you love me inside.
when will you see me and give me importance?
and when will you think about how i feel?
i have been thinking of you all this time,
but when i can feel my relevance in your life?
pure love is what i am exerting to you,
your happiness comes first in my objectives.
and when will i become first on the list?
in God's time i could answer the questions of when.
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A contest entry
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Thanks for entering this into my contest. I often wonder things like this myself. I wish you much luck.
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I often wonder myself with these kinds of things, when I am going to be the only one that matters, that he claims I am...when will it show? Beautifully put.
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This was ok. There's a good pleading feeling in it so good job for that. Thanks for the entry!
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I wasn't really looking for this in my contest. However, the emotions are strong and I hope things get better for you. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Ah..I love the intimacy of your heart pured in the every word of this verse...well done..my thanks for such a touching entry in my contest...
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Nicely written with honest emotion and a heartfelt questioning of when, where, if.... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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