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dianthus

June sun calls
upon dewed
garden floor

spiced cinnamon
infuses my thoughts

I see you in
feathered purity

no need for
shouting colours
from branched heights

your essence
so engages

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dianthus in my garden
and my wife Kate

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie