Was I really missing something?
Hate, Please just let it slip away
Just let me end it now, Just please
Don't make me live to see another day
I'm not here, just for the attention
Deathly pale and lying on the floor
In a pool of my own blood and tears
Please God, just let me live no more
Maybe hoping you would notice
I cut my wrists and darkened my life
Maybe there was World War Three
Being fought inside
I tried, and I failed
All that happened, was that you got hurt
Not what I intended, at all
Somehow you just made it worse
And now we're here today
...[To Be Continued]
Author notes
Well this really is not the best poem. But I kinda needed to get it out of my system, that hurting people was never what i intended, never what i wanted. And im done with always hurting people when things dont..work out the way i planned. -thearmsofsorrow
A contest entry
- Inspire me by Kristin Melissa.
1050 points, ended July 2, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP's Best Prewrites by lowercase prelude.
800 points, ended July 22, 2008, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I think alot of people know how you are feeling. I know there have been times where I have hurt people and that wasn't my intent.
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hey, cheers
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koodles I've been your position before, wrote about it some what too. Koodles Good luck in teh contest.
Blessed be
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thanks youse
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