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Penman

Apostasy towards the ordinary
words to your own announce adaptation
in true apprenticeship to mastery

Consciousness penned far from adventitious
yet layered with levels of pure abstract
really can change a reader's perceptions

This concludes my humble dedication 

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  • Desire gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    Magnificent!!

    Wonderful weaving of words within this Humble dedication of Inspiration
    The images bring forth a smile
    Love this!!
    Keep that quill dancing~

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • raggyann
    June 21, 2008
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    GOOD DEDICATION


  • penman gold member
    June 21, 2008
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    Excellent

    So very well said. A truly creative and skillful poem. Thank you for the kindness.


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    I agree with this dedication...his writing certainly does have a way of envisioning the world a bit differently. Well done, Poet Love, Lane

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    This is a nice dedication you have a very kind heart and this poem proves wish you much peace and love always much luck

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