Dancing with the wind
her heart begins to soar
Turmoil within her heart
slowly vanishes
Twirling her tension away
like a tornado created in her mind
Movements unscripted
like a sudden storm
Tears fall like rain
across her troubled face
Freedom released as she dances
to release the storm within her soul
Author notes
8-pic credit:Butterflies and Hurricanes by ~Aerelin
In a list
A contest entry
- If you write, write for here ^_^ by luna-midnight.
900 points, ended June 26, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so beautiful and you did such a great job with the picture here. The imagery was wonderful and you painted such a lovely picture with your words. Well done and all the best for the contest.
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your kind words
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The storms of life thanks for the read needed it
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Thank you
Thank you so much
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the stroms of life dancing within, tears like rain...turmoil within the heart...sighs...so strong i could feel the loneliness of the wind
Wonderful and good luck in the contest
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Thank you
Thank you so much, it is a beautiful picture to work with
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awww wow...this picks fast just like a tornado, wonderful write and thanks for entering
hope you had fun
take care and good luck
stephanie
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Thank you
Thank you this was a fun prompt to work with
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