grant sweeter measure
contained of kiss forever
where lips never part
for i long for touch tender
to merge with reality
as in dreams heartfelt
of the beautiful Ashley
who owns my essence
and defines loveliness
of which my spirit treasures
Author notes
6-pic credit:An Eternal Kiss by ~MisterHip
Just in a mood to write about her right now..
A contest entry
- If you write, write for here ^_^ by luna-midnight.
900 points, ended June 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hmmmmmmmm ... you didn't capitalize the i ... i'm wondering who is the D and who is the s in this relationship
lol ... only in the mood to write about her with this one huh?
yeah riiiggghhhhtttttt
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Nicely done
Great job and a lovely feel to the essence of the picture. Keep penning.
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awww this is beautiful mark, i was hoping people would pick this pic, its pretty ^_^
and this poem is lovely, sure shell love it
thanks for entering, hope you had fun
take care and good luck
stephanie
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A sharing of the inner beauty of the love here is the true joy of life..well done...and thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
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so sweet heart feeling
classy too
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Awwwww this is so sweet. Good luck in the contest
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Aww!!
This is so sweet and cute!
Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside
Wonderfully written!
Best of luck in your contest!
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Awwwwwwww this is really sweet and the love that you have and share is beyond amazing goodluck in the contest best wishes
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