Private Moments

She waits by waters edge
where her dreams become reality
Soothing sound of rolling waves
settling her troubled mind

Soft sand between her toes
relaxes her weary body
As she counts the stars above

enjoying the
private moments within her soul

Author notes

2-pic above ^^^^ pic credit: Counting the Stars by =yanachan

A contest entry

If you write, write for here ^_^ by luna-midnight. 900 points, ended June 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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PurringKitten
June 21, 2008

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Private moments within her soul standing upon the oceans edge...softness between her toes, her weary body relaxes...such a beautifully soft feeling...the waves, the winds, the stars...pull a wee sigh from my heart...thank you for sharing such beauty with me
- buffsab99
  June 21, 2008
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  Thank you
  Thank you so much, this picture spoke to me and reminded me of a good friend when she was little
luna-midnight
June 21, 2008

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aww this is very sweet
lovely write and thanks for entering
hope you had fun, take care
stephanie
- buffsab99
  June 21, 2008
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  Thank you
  Thank you so much for your kind words and hosting this contest