Sea of kisses

let me swerve inside

your chantilly curls,

and feel the soft caress

of an ocean of passion,

as each enchanted kiss

dissolves the blushing skies

into a sea of serenity

as the calm beauty

of your tender lips

whispering love,

flutters desire,

my heart swirls

across wishes

of an eternal love,

saturating my soul

til the astral forces

lose their raison d'être

Author notes

Raison d'être - a phrase borrowed from French meaning "reason for being"

In a list

Love and romance • next in list

A contest entry

Sea Of Kisses. by Poetryintheblood. 650 points, ended July 6, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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Fritz O skennick
September 18, 2008

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Absolutely beautiful...
Soft, tender & heartfelt...
Great narrative, rhythm & flow that was compelling throughout...
Well done!!!
Maddogk
July 27, 2008

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raison d'être
Within my own 'raison d'être' lingers the taste of an
enchanted kiss of serendipity...
Yet, known unto I, the cherry lips of the Sara Jane
Shall, alas be but a dream of passion to I -
A mere mortal of raw intensity....
A caged bird never to be set to his flight of freedom...
bound within the walls of thyn own creativity, and
destined to reap the benefits of such friendships, as your own.

This poetry brings out eons of energy within me..
A definate winner for me..

Jeffro
penman
July 6, 2008
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Excellent
Such a truly beautifully crafted poem. So very well done. Congratulations on the silver.
Poetryintheblood
July 6, 2008
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
leo2
June 23, 2008

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Damn, I forgot what I was going to say...lol. I got carried away in my puddle of passion. Thanks for the smiles and good luck in the contest.

Sincerely,
Leo Long
Patpowers
June 21, 2008

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Lovely write here Sara Jane! Compassionate and beautifully done! Thanks also for the French ending to this.. GOOD JOB!!
individuality
June 21, 2008

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swerve is such a great way to start a poem i think, swerve and smile along love's rippled seas and feel the spray of fine romance that curls up to meet one head on.