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Sea of kisses

let me swerve inside

your chantilly curls,

and feel the soft caress

of an ocean of passion,

as each enchanted kiss

dissolves the blushing skies

into a sea of serenity

 

as the calm beauty

of your tender lips

whispering love,

flutters desire,

my heart swirls

across wishes

of an eternal love,

saturating my soul

til the astral forces

lose their raison d'être

Author notes

Raison d'être - a phrase borrowed from French meaning "reason for being"

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Absolutely beautiful...

    Soft, tender & heartfelt...
    Great narrative, rhythm & flow that was compelling throughout...
    Well done!!!


  • Maddogk
    July 27, 2008

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    raison d'être

    Within my own 'raison d'être' lingers the taste of an
    enchanted kiss of serendipity...
    Yet, known unto I, the cherry lips of the Sara Jane
    Shall, alas be but a dream of passion to I -
    A mere mortal of raw intensity....
    A caged bird never to be set to his flight of freedom...
    bound within the walls of thyn own creativity, and
    destined to reap the benefits of such friendships, as your own.

    This poetry brings out eons of energy within me..
    A definate winner for me..

    Jeffro


  • penman gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a truly beautifully crafted poem. So very well done. Congratulations on the silver.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • leo2
    June 23, 2008

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    Damn, I forgot what I was going to say...lol. I got carried away in my puddle of passion. Thanks for the smiles and good luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Patpowers silver member
    June 21, 2008

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    Lovely write here Sara Jane! Compassionate and beautifully done! Thanks also for the French ending to this.. GOOD JOB!!


  • individuality gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    swerve is such a great way to start a poem i think, swerve and smile along love's rippled seas and feel the spray of fine romance that curls up to meet one head on.

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