Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Deep In My Skin



              she files her nails,
        and paints them the color of lust
  tonight--    my skin, will bear their beauty



Author notes

prompt; sharp

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 7 of 7

  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 18

    Edit | Reply
    Wow that s a stunning little piece, you captured so much in so few lines it captivated me. Well done and best to you in the contest


  • Frozentearz
    June 22, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    ooh wowwwwwwww... short, but ever so powerful here
    Mally. makes me blush lol..
    Congratulations on your award.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    June 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this is truly a nice sensual poem of the requested quickie, thank you for sharing , nice Bronze too...congratulations


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Sensual with nails the color of lust and your eager anticipation of them in the night ahead. Congratulations on the bronze.
    Marlene


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    fierce passion is so few words

    excellent

    God bless...


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 21, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    love it Mal...very sharp.


  • Whoochi gold member
    June 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is exquisite...Love the passion and animalistic attitude in this...Love these short writes....Best of Luck

1 - 7 of 7