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Diamond in the Rough

Anger
turmoil within
holding onto life
with grim determination
so many evil negative forces
surrounds us from every road and avenue
but they will never defeat us
for we will find beauty
everywhere around
no matter what
Peace


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  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    Shaped poetry is a rare art. I wrote a poem in the shape or a handgun a long time ago and our mutual friend (CC) said to me, "Why don't you write it in the shape of a paragraph?" lol I still like the idea, though. You did it well.

    M


  • klassy lassy
    June 23, 2008

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    Form poetry done beautifully... The words make it like a diamond in the rough surviving all the pressures to endure as a most coveted treasure. "F ~ Karen


    • AusStar silver member
      June 23, 2008
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      Thank you Karen, you have inspired me for a title 'Diamond in the Rough' I think its perfect for this poem!
      Love & Hugs to you.