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The Demon Inside

In us all there is a demon
That threatens to overcome
It controls and it consumes us
Picks us off, one by one

Just sit and think for a moment
What's your demon that's inside
For everyone it's different
And I won't tell you mine

But everyday I wake up
Then my demon comes to call
And to it evil clutches
I eventually befall

I try so hard to fight it
I summon all the strength within
but eventually I succumb
And I know the demon wins

Some people's are right out there
For all the world to see
But my inner demon
Is known by only me

But I know I am no different
From all the others round about
I look and them and wonder
What's yours? drugs?, or lust?, or doubt?

I know that as you're reading
Your demon springs to mind
Don't say that you don't have one
Because I know for sure you've lied

So how do we overcome
the demon that's within
If you ever find the answer
Then be sure to clue me in!





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  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    What a great idea for a poem and so true. "We all have our demons" is a very common expression. "Nobody's perfect" is another one that means the same thing. You got me thinking about what mine are. "Doubt" would probably top the list. Great write! Thanks.


    • AusStar
      June 25, 2008
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      See what I mean... you can never tell what peoples 'demons' are, I'd have never picked you for a doubt man.