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Swan Song

moonlight dancing

 

There is a place we find desire,
the promises of love conspire.
Where azure dreams reflecting bright,
As lovers dance beneath moonlight.

My lord and I approach the high
with heat entwine in kisses sigh.
The senses yearning in our delight,
As lovers dance beneath moonlight.

Where love and lust become pleasure
Savouring passion at leisure.
Our tension climbs to furies height,
As lovers dance beneath moonlight.

There is a place we find desire,
As lovers dance beneath moonlight.

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Artwork: Unknown

PP listed as a collab as I'm working on some artwork for this one.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    A Kyrielle sonnet and well done, good work and good fun too!

    You are a real writer these days in either of your names and both of us are always delighted with your entries
    Keep 'em coming

    Jeff


  • KayJay
    June 21, 2008

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    See what happens when you work with yourself? Beautiful flow and the repetitive refrain keeps pulling the image back into your poem... Tender and sensual... Well done.
    Ken


  • The Poetic Angel
    June 21, 2008
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    wow Jems this is butiful

    xxx Your angel xxx