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Kill the Messenger but Spare the Postman

I killed the messenger but spared the Postman
I traveled to outer space and back,
but I still feel like the astronaut who can't get high.
Will things ever be right?

I killed the messenger but spared the Postman
I swam to the bottom of the ocean
but I still feel like muse who can't inspire.
Will I ever find one that isn't a liar?

I killed the messenger but spared the Postman
I swallowed the bottle down,
but I still feel empty.
Will I ever find me?

I killed the messenger but spared the Postman
I read notes you left me ,
but I'm just as confused as before.
I killed the messenger, there will be no more.

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Just a poem, don't ask what it means, as it's really to complicated to explain.

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  • None But Nim
    August 24, 2008
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    A beautiful poem, indeed!


  • Yummy Cinnamon Bun
    June 21, 2008

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    :/

    I love you to from the stars to the bottom of the deepest ocean trench! This is really good babe. I like it a lot. And I think I understand it perfectly but that will be for a privet conversation.
    love you hun


  • Candyknife gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    i love it

    very intriguing piece, i love the contradictions, its so melancholically beautiful
    great job with this ray

    ~.♥.~Rena~.♥.~