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Noone elses.

Twist life around,
Rearrnge the puzzle peices,
But them the way you want them,
That's what I do,
Make a happy moment sad,
Make a sad moment happy,
Be haphazard,
Be different,
Make verses different lengths,
If you feel like it,
If it's a weird poem...
Stand out in the world,
Don't care what they think,

Eat pudding for dinner,
Buy toilet paper for a present,
Tell your mum off,
For playing with her food,
Deleberately loose at sports day,
Don't be part of the crowd,
But don't be part of the crowd...
that's not part of the crowd,
Do what you want,

But only if you want to,
Don't listen to this poem,
If you think it's trash,
Be as normal if you want,
If that's how you are,
Whatever you are,
That's ok,
Don't let others,
Bring y
      o
        u
        d
          o
            w
              n,
You don't deserve it.

Accept other people,
Don't hate them for their beliefs,
Or if they're ugly,
Or if they hate abercrombie,
Don't forget the wider picture,
Don't foget your are alive,
Don't forget this is your life,
No one elses.

Author notes

I didnt want to describe my personality in this because this sort of is my personality and...
Sister.

These lines mean:
"But don't be part of the crowd...
that's not part of the crowd,"
Don't not follow a fashion because you don't want to be in fashion because that's a fashion...to not follow a fashion,
Type thing.
OK...well...yeah. hopefully you all get it all.

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  • Little Lottie
    July 7, 2008

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    Awesome. Flipping awesome. And I understood thaat all. But then again I once went on a rant for an hour about how people and quarters were similar... Anyway, thanks for being patient. I loved this. I really did.


  • xXmidnightstarXx
    June 21, 2008

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    I love it

    I think it was very well written and I like how you typed "bring you down" like you did, falling down, that was neat. I like the message this has carrying in it. Nice write.