Brown eyes glinting in the moon
Hypnotising stare
Guaranteed to make me swoon
As I stroke your hair.
Feathered fingers tantalise
Mesmerising me
Have no need to fantacise
You have set me free
Dewdrops glisten in the lights
Hovering above
Trickle as I reach new heights
Bathing me in Love.
A contest entry
- Rhyme and Flow part 5 Love, romance or sensual - 50,000 points series by cricketjeff.
4000 points, ended July 16, 2008, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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OK a love poem including the moon
can we take it as read that I love it?
You know we adore all your entries so please keep them coming,
Thanks a lot
Jeff and Sue


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Loved reading this very sensual romantic write-good luck with this one -
xxx Hilly
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THE BEST
Its lovely, i would love to at that time, -
Excellent!
What a beautiful tribute poem! All the imagery one needs to be a part of the moment. Tickles the emotions with childlike love. Well done! Don






