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Moon Love

Brown eyes glinting in the moon
Hypnotising stare
Guaranteed to make me swoon
As I stroke your hair.

Feathered fingers tantalise
Mesmerising me
Have no need to fantacise
You have set me free

Dewdrops glisten in the lights
Hovering above
Trickle as I reach new heights
Bathing me in Love.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    OK a love poem including the moon
    can we take it as read that I love it?

    You know we adore all your entries so please keep them coming,
    Thanks a lot
    Jeff and Sue


  • moonbumps silver member
    July 8, 2008
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    Loved reading this very sensual romantic write-good luck with this one -
    xxx Hilly


  • hamid
    June 28, 2008
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    THE BEST

    Its lovely, i would love to at that time,


  • Quiet places
    June 21, 2008

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    Excellent!

    What a beautiful tribute poem! All the imagery one needs to be a part of the moment. Tickles the emotions with childlike love. Well done! Don