Speared swiftly,
repeatedly,
your words wound my heart.
Author notes
Prompt- Sharp
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie...Three lines...Sharp by Luna Tique Fringe.
525 points, ended June 21, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is one pain
that last longer than any other....mac
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yes...wounds unseen, but felt for ages....
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I like this, but I think it would be better without the word 'through'
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Thank you, it does flow better this way...
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oooo! harsh
such agony that person must feel!
great write!!!
and best of luck in the contest!!!
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Thanks!
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