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When it comes to you ...

When it comes to you
the hour-glass seems a devil,
as the million grains of sand flow,
I rest in the tranquility of your eyes
unable to abjure time

When it comes to you...
suddenly the moon beams -
filtered through the bedroom glass
brighten up and shimmer upon my soul
immersing me in your sweet amor


When it comes to you...
a sudden tide of stance
seems risen above me
shoving me thousand fathoms deep
into the enraptured world of dreams


But


When it comes to us...
my senses give away
and I've no more words!


-Neha

June 21, 2008




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  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    This is beautiful

    Very well penned with love so deeply felt .


  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 26, 2008
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    "no more words" great writing, thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest lol