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My Love For Your Love [lets be together]

You give me a sense of love,
You make me smile so much more,
Your words are a reminder to me,
Of why you are the one i adore.

Your kisses are in my dreams,
Your eyes give me this light,
I love everything about you,
Especially your smile; so bright.

You hug me because you care,
I love you because i just do,
You can call me whatever you want,
But to me you can be my boo.

I want to be with you forever,
You happen to be my everything,
I will do anything for you,
Because it's my happiness that you bring.




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  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 28

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    wow

    this is such a lovely write... i love your words an everything! it just floes so well and the rhyme was simply brilliant! absolutely awesome poem this is! keep penning kays

    AWESOME!


  • DeSiBoO14
    June 23
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    Aw..DiS iS sOo kUtE!!i WiSh I hAd SuM1 2mAk Me FeEl LyK u Do!!Ur SoO lUcKy.. I lUv Da PoEm!!


  • brightXdarkness
    June 21
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    YAY! I like this one. I like how the rhyming is almost a playfulness - like the kind that love gives... And I think the background helps aid this poem a lot too! The second to last stanza is kind of strange with the last line... but the last line in the last stanza made me smile hehe

    ALex