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why look for fish

you swayed so well
and your suit of armour of a piecemeal nature
contained a few secrets to what you left in your wake.

My hand extended for you
felt the water in a bit more detail
than it would have otherwise;

a scent arose that led to you
and your trail
swirled enough to justify my quest.

well, in case you were thinking, it wasn't all that grand
it was just that i wanted you to swing close enough to
my nose
before you slipped away.

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