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(Your Sharp) Forest of Thorns

 

 

 

 

 

My heart, 
the bubble traipsing through your radar...
       it only blipped once. 



 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • marlene47 silver member
    June 21, 2008

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    Awww, sounds vicious... this one with the radar, didn't even give you a chance, poor heart.
    Congratulations on the silver.
    Marlene

  • ocerus
    June 21, 2008

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    I don't believe one can actually "traipse." "Traipsing through," perhaps? And I love the last line. It leaves a lot of room to wonder about! Good as always. - ocerus


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 21, 2008
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    I like this one...excellent. Like the format, too.