You'll never know me.
You can try all you wish,
but you wont know me.
You'll know my lies,
and my past.
You can look into my eyes,
but ill always turn my back on you.
You can push your way inside,
but you'll never break threw.
I'm hiding from you.
Maybe because I don't want you to care.
Maybe because I don't want to get hurt,
but does it matter?
No, I still won't let you in.
Author notes
I picked option 4 o-0
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration with Options by Dancing Feather.
700 points, ended July 10, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me how bad i write^^
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i like it.bet alot of people can relate to it me including ^^
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Good write. I agree with my partner about that one line. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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Great write, however one of your lines didn't make sense to me. It was the line that says "but all always turn my back on you." Thank you for your entry and Good Luck in the contest.
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sorry
sorry about that.. it was a typo..
it supposed to be "ill always turn my back on you" -
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It's okay. That's why I questioned it.
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